The diagram below shows how geothermal energy is used to produced electricity. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The picture below illustrates the production of electricity using geothermal energy.
Overall
, there are 5 steps
to make cold water
becomes
electricity that can be used for people to do their activities. The Correct subject-verb agreement
become
steps
are separated to
Change preposition
into
the
2 phases, the Correct article usage
apply
steps
at the underground and the steps
at the ground.
The
first Change preposition
In the
step
, cold water
is pumped down 4.5 kilometers
Change the spelling
kilometres
into
Change preposition
apply
the
underground. Correct article usage
apply
Then
, the water
goes to the injection well and passes geothermal
zone which contains Correct article usage
the geothermal
of
hot rocks. Remove the preposition
apply
This
step
makes the water
becoming
hot. In the next Wrong verb form
become
step
, the production well is pumped the hot water
up to the condenser. In this
place, the steam from the hot water
is used as a power to generate the turbine. At
the final Change preposition
In
step
, the generator produces the electricity from the power that gained
from the turbine and transfers it to the tower, so it can be used for many activities.Add a missing verb
is gained
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