The diagram below shows how geothermal energy is used to produced electricity. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The diagram below shows how geothermal energy is used to produced electricity. 

Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The picture below illustrates the production of electricity using geothermal energy.
Overall
, there are 5
steps
to make cold
water
becomes
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electricity that can be used for people to do their activities. The
steps
are separated
to
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the
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2 phases, the
steps
at the underground and the
steps
at the ground.
The
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first
step
, cold
water
is pumped down 4.5
kilometers
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into
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the
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underground.
Then
, the
water
goes to the injection well and passes
geothermal
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the geothermal
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zone which contains
of
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hot rocks.
This
step
makes the
water
becoming
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hot. In the next
step
, the production well is pumped the hot
water
up to the condenser. In
this
place, the steam from the hot
water
is used as a power to generate the turbine.
At
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the final
step
, the generator produces the electricity from the power that
gained
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from the turbine and transfers it to the tower, so it can be used for many activities.
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