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The chart below shows the average monthly expenditure by British Households in three year.

The chart below shows the average monthly expenditure by British Households in three year.
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The given
bart
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bar
 chart describes the average monthly
spendings
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spending
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 that
were
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 consumed by people in the UK in three decades ( 1990 , 2000 and 2010). Units are measured in
pounds
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 sterling.
Overall
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 , there is indisputable evidence that almost all types of expenditure
are
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were
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 the greatest in 2010 , compared to the years 1990 and 2000 . At first , in 1990 , renting
is
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was
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 the most used by British people , showing about 450 sterling
pounds
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 ,
while
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 utility bills
are
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 the lowest ( just under 100 ). As far as the next decade's
spendinds
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spending
spendings
 are concerned , it is worth mentioning that renting and utility bills are the highest and lowest as they were in 1990. The former is just above 500 ,
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 the latter is nearly 90 sterling of
pounds
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. Looking at the chart in more detail , in 2010 , renting shows the highest percentage of expenditure , illustrating 600
pounds
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 sterling. As for the
smalest
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smallest
 proportion of
spendings
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spending
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, Residents of the UK spent 100
pounds
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 sterling on entertainment.

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