the map below show an industrial area in the town of Norbition and planne of future development of the site

the map below show an industrial area in the town of Norbition and planne of future development of the site
The maps compare the current Norbition industrial area with the proposed development for the future.
Overall
, the expansion of the
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includes the replacement of the factories with houses and the introduction of essential facilities,
such
as shops and health care.
Additionally
, a playground and a school will be built for children's development.
To begin
, it is planned to move farmland to the east and to divide the river with the main
road
, providing access to different areas. Three factory
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, that surround the main roundabout, will be removed, making space for shops and homes.
Moreover
, health services will be provided by establishing a medical centre across the street from the stores on the southern side. Even though
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many changes will be applied to improve the area, the main
road
that
streches
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stretches
from the roundabout to the east, will remain untouched.
Along with
homes, a playground will be located on
this
road
, eventually leading to a school.
Furthermore
, an additional roundabout will be added, just from the southern side of the main one,
although
significantly smaller, connecting the lively area with the
road
at the very bottom, running from the west to the east.
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