The bar chart below shows the top ten countries for the production and consumption of electricity in 2014. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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China and the US depicted significantly larger amounts in both production(5398 Use synonyms
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, Russia, Japan and India generated 1057, 936.2 and 871 Linking Words
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