The bar chart below shows the top ten countries for the production and consumption of electricity in 2014. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The bar chart illustrates the generation and
consumption
of electricity
during 2014 in some developed countries
and developing ones.
Overall
, most countries
in the chart produced more electricity
than the consumption
of it but Germany.
China and the US depicted significantly larger amounts in both production(5398 billion
kWh
and 4099 billion
kWh
) and consumption
(5322 billion
kWh
and 3866 billion
kWh
) of electricity
than those in any other countries
.
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, Russia, Japan and India generated 1057, 936.2 and 871 billion
kWh
of electricity
separately while
they used 1038, 856.7 and 698.8 billion
kWh
of it in 2014. In comparison, the figures for production and consumption
in Canada, France and Korea, Rep. all less than 620 billion
kWh
in the same year.
Dramatically, the number of production(526.6 billion
kWh
) of electricity
in Germany was slightly lower than consumption
of it(582.5 Correct article usage
the consumption
billion
kWh
) while
the other countries
showed the opposite conditions.Submitted by odongua on
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