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The maps below show the changes that have taken place at the seaside town of Templeton between 1990 and 2005. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The maps below show the changes that have taken place at the seaside town of Templeton between 1990 and 2005. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The maps illustrate the redevelopment
at
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of
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 the seaside town of Templeton from 1990 to 2005.
Overall
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, there were some huge constructions in 2005 which showed more facilities. Most of the houses near the river were
remodel
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remodelled
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 to
apartements
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apartments
 in 2005. There were trees behind the school but it was cut
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then
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and then
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 made
it
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into an airport. A railway station stayed at the same place without
being replace
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being replaced
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.
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,
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Ferry was built in 2005 in the corner of the town. There was a new factory near the railway station which was close to Ferry.
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,
supermarket
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the supermarket
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 was constructed below the houses on the right side of the road. Significant changes
was
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were
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 shown for the
house
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houses
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 and trees in 1990 that
had been
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were
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 replaced
to
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with
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 more new apartments since there was only one building in 1990 at that place.
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,
hospital
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the hospital
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 and house near the parking station stayed the same in 2005.
River
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The river
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was
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apply
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also
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remain
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remained
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 the same without any changes.
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Vocabulary: The word "stayed" was used 2 times.
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