Some people think that the best way to solve global environment problems is to increase the cost of fuel. To what extent do you agree or disagree ?

A group of

people

believe that increasing the

price

of

fuel

is the ideal method to combat

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environmental issues across the globe. I,

on the other hand

, do not agree with

this

argument since it appears to me that the best way of dealing with

this

problem is to increase

awarenes

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awareness

of

this

issue

.

Altought

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Although

I cannot deny that

rising

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a

fuel

price

would alleviate

this

issue

in

a

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short term, the problem will remain the same

in

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a long period. The main reason is that in human psychology the more you

incease

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increase

the

demadn

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demand

the more

people

work hard to achieve it.

Thus

, from

this

standpoint

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it could be said that if a

fuel

price

is

risen

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raised

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to handle the global environmental

problems

,

people

will try not to lose their demand, which is

a

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fuel

in

this

case or

in other words

convenience. In

this

way, they will not even be aware of

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solving global environmental

issue

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issues

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.

In stead

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, folks will consider

this

change as a punishment.

Nevertheless

, I firmly believe that solving

this

problem is related to

people

themselves or their minds. If starting from school years everyone is educated about the importance of natural resources and protecting them, it would have

a long-lasting effects

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long-lasting effects

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.

Apart from

this

, if social networking websites are forced to prepare programs about the significance of nature and solving existing

problems

in

this

manner, it is more likely to have positive effects. The main reason for

this

is that it is the social media that controls

poeples

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people

mind

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.

Therefore

, if we focus on informing and educating individuals about the

issue

, it is highly probable that environmental

problems

will be handled on a global scale. In conclusion, I consider that

while

it is true that a high

fuel

price

can somehow have positive effects

about

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eradicating global

problems

that are related to

environment

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the environment

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, it will not be

continuously

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. The best method to combat the

issue

is to develop

individuals

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understanding.