The map shows the public library 20 years ago and now. Compare and summarise the information in about 150 words.
The maps illustrate the changes in the layouts of the central library over a 20-year period.
Overall
, it is clear that
there were several developments the
structure of the public library, with increasing the number of rooms and adding new facilities.
Change preposition
in the
To begin
, looking at the maps closely, the reading room
which is located on the left side of entrance
was changed by the computer Add an article
the entrance
room
, whereas
the children's book room
situated in
the northeast side Change preposition
on
replaced
with Add a missing verb
was replaced
lecture
Correct article usage
a lecture
room
. However
, on the right of entrance
, the Add an article
the entrance
enuiry
desk Correct your spelling
enquiry
were
removed as the cafe was added.
Change the verb form
was
On the other hand
, as can be seen from the maps on
the Change preposition
in
center
of the library tables & chairs were taken, Change the spelling
centre
while
information
desk and self-service machines were placed in between the lecture Correct article usage
the information
room
and the cafe.Submitted by orxanmikayilov44 on
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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Vocabulary: Replace the words room with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Only 6 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: The word "maps" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "changes" was used 2 times.
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