the map below show an industrial area in the town of Norbition and planne of future development of the site
The map below illustrates a plan
of
future changes in an industrial area in the town of Change preposition
for
Norbition
.
First of all, factories will be removed by housing. Correct your spelling
Nutrition
Also
will be added infrastructure places such
as Schools, Playgrounds, Medical centres, and Shops. A bridge will be built across the river to connect the main part of the area to the farmland where one more housing will be built.
On the future development plan school is placed at the east of a town. The main circle medical centre is placed to the right of the main circle road
and the shops are placed to the left. It also
will be added one smaller circle road
on the main road
to the south.
The amount of buildings is going to increase, so new roads will be added to the houses on the west and to the playground in the east between road
and the river.Correct article usage
the road
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