Trees are becoming more and more similar because people are able to buy the same products anywhere in the world do you think this is a positive or negative development give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge
Nowadays , Export and import of the products are increasing day by day across the
country
. I believe this
is a positive development between the countries to maintain healthy relation
and growth in Fix the agreement mistake
relations
country's
economy . I will discuss Correct article usage
the country's
further
why sending material from one country
to another country
or region is a positive development with some examples from newspaper
and Fix the agreement mistake
newspapers
journal
.
Fix the agreement mistake
journals
To begin
with , People are extremely happy as they are getting product
of their choice Add an article
a product
the product
while
residing in the same city and without spending money on travel . For instance
, India is a hub of Ayurveda and these products are very good for skin and health. It has been revealed in the survey done by THE TIMES OF INDIA because
of Correct word choice
that because
import
of Patanjali Ayurveda Correct article usage
the import
product
there is Fix the agreement mistake
products
a
immense growth Change the article
an
around
30% in India's GDP. Change preposition
of around
In addition
, Some countries produced
more medicines and vaccines because Wrong verb form
produce
raw
Add an article
the raw
material
for medicine Fix the agreement mistake
materials
easily
available in their Add a missing verb
are easily
country
, as medicine is essential for all to treat disease . Each country
has its own speciality and buying those
Change the determiner
that product
those products
product
in your own country
is the best thing.
Secondly
, Local brand
going to vanish in front of international brands so it affects Fix the agreement mistake
brands
to
local Change preposition
apply
humans emotion
. People start thinking Fix the agreement mistake
human emotions
as
we are Correct word choice
that
loosing
our identity . Replace the word
losing
for example
, Market survey done by M.B.A
marketing students from Delhi Correct your spelling
M.B.A.
university
, People always prefer to eat atCapitalize word
University
Dominos
Pizza Change noun form
Domino's
instead
of eating at any local brand
. So indirectly , some times
local Correct your spelling
sometimes
brand
disappear and totally Fix the agreement mistake
brands
vanished
from the market.
Wrong verb form
vanish
To sum up
, Getting products or delivering product
Fix the agreement mistake
products
of
different countries is Change preposition
from
a
economic growth of Correct article usage
the
entire
nation so Correct article usage
the entire
Government
has to put some restrictions to avoid total hold of that particular Correct article usage
the Government
brand
in the market .Submitted by preetiaug25 on
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coherence cohesion
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coherence cohesion
Introduce the topic and your thesis statement more clearly in your introduction. Your conclusion should succinctly summarize your main points without introducing new information.
task achievement
Develop your main points more thoroughly with adequate support. Each point should be explored in more depth, with examples that are directly related and supportive of your argument. Try to elaborate on how the development affects different stakeholders.
task achievement
While you have provided examples in your essay, strive to use more specific and directly relevant examples that clearly support your arguments.
task achievement
Be sure to completely address all parts of the task. The essay should present a balanced view that covers both positive and negative aspects of the topic, with a clear position throughout.
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