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the graph below shows the number of university graduatesin canada from 1992 to 2007

the graph below shows the number of university graduatesin canada from 1992 to 2007
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The graph below represents the figure of both
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 who got the certificate of university graduation from 1992 to 2006.
Overall
, we can recognize the number of female university graduates in
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all years was higher than the male. In 1992, the figure
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both graduates was the lowest during the
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,
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70,000 and 100,000
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 each
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male and female.
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, more and more people
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 both
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 graduated from university as time goes by. In 2006, the number of
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 graduates was nearly 150,000 and the
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 was about 95,000. The line graph
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 showed
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multiple
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up and down during the whole period
whereas
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 the
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was
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recorded
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 only one decreasing line from 1996 to 1998.
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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
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Vocabulary: The word "graph" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "figure" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 2 times.
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