The table below shows the numbers of visitors to Ashdown Museum during the year before and the year after it was refurbished.The charts show the result of surveys asking visitors how satisfied they were with their visit,during the samw two periods.
The provided table compares the number of people who visited the Ashdown Museum in two separate
years
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years
before and after its renovation. Use synonyms
Additionally
, the pie charts illustrate how Linking Words
visitors
feel about the museum in these Use synonyms
years
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Overall
, the table reveals that the refurbishment contributed positively to the number of Linking Words
visitors
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Moreover
, it is clearly observable that changes led to a substantial increase in the figure for levels of satisfaction.
During Linking Words
this
period, the number of individuals who attended Ashdown Museum experienced a dramatic rise from 74,000 to 92,000. Linking Words
Furthermore
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according to
the surveys, prior to renovation, the percentage of Linking Words
visitors
who were very satisfied stood at 15%, Use synonyms
while
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this
figure for satisfied ones was higher at nearly one-third. After the reconstruction, these figures increased markedly to 35% and 40%, respectively. Linking Words
By contrast
, the proportion of dissatisfied Linking Words
visitors
saw a considerable fall of 25%. Use synonyms
Similarly
, the proportion of very dissatisfied Linking Words
visitors
was halved, declining from 10% to 5%. It is worth noting that, in both Use synonyms
years
, 5% of people were reluctant to participate in the surveys.Use synonyms
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