The table below shows the numbers of visitors to Ashdown Museum during the year before and the year after it was refurbished.The charts show the result of surveys asking visitors how satisfied they were with their visit,during the samw two periods.
The provided table compares the number of people who visited the Ashdown Museum in two separate
years
, the years
before and after its renovation. Additionally
, the pie charts illustrate how visitors
feel about the museum in these years
.
Overall
, the table reveals that the refurbishment contributed positively to the number of visitors
. Moreover
, it is clearly observable that changes led to a substantial increase in the figure for levels of satisfaction.
During this
period, the number of individuals who attended Ashdown Museum experienced a dramatic rise from 74,000 to 92,000. Furthermore
, according to
the surveys, prior to renovation, the percentage of visitors
who were very satisfied stood at 15%, while
this
figure for satisfied ones was higher at nearly one-third. After the reconstruction, these figures increased markedly to 35% and 40%, respectively. By contrast
, the proportion of dissatisfied visitors
saw a considerable fall of 25%. Similarly
, the proportion of very dissatisfied visitors
was halved, declining from 10% to 5%. It is worth noting that, in both years
, 5% of people were reluctant to participate in the surveys.Submitted by m.r.zamani1376678 on
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