The bar chart below shows the percentafe of australian men and women in diffrent age groups who did regular physical activity in 2010. summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The bar chart below shows the percentafe of australian men and women in diffrent age groups who did regular physical activity in 2010.

summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The bar chart illustrates the proportion of Australian males and females in various age categories who did regular physical activity in 2010. After Analysis, it can be seen clearly that, The percentage of men doing regular physical activities from 15 to 44 years is showing a declining trend which signifies that physical activities are very popular among the 15 to 24 group. But the interesting thing is that
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trend has been reversed from 45 to over 65 groups. The maximum active group is the young generation 15 to 24 which represents 52.8 percent of the population.
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, the percentage of women doing physical exercise is significant in the upward trend where the maximum activities among the 45 to 54 group
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holds 52.3
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of the population.
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