The line graph shows the global demand of different types of textile from 1980 to 2015.

The line graph shows the global demand of different types of textile from 1980 to 2015.
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The graph below illustrates the
demand
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for 4-type textile
fibers
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in the world from 1980 to 2015.
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, the picture shows that the need for polyester significantly grew, followed by cotton and cellulosic. Despite that, the
demand
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for wool fluctuated and had the lowest number among other
fibers
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. In 1980, the consumption of cotton was the highest with more than 10
million
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tons
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.
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, another
fiber
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got its
demand
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under that number. In the following years, the need for cotton gradually rose to 27
million
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tons
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in nearly 2000. But,
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it dropped slightly to 22
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tons
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before jumping again in the next years to over 30
million
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in 2015. Dramatical
demand
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for fiber happened in polyester which just only got under 10
million
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tons
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in the start but had the largest number among the fibers almost 70
million
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tons
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at its peak in 2015.
On the other hand
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, cellulosic and wool did not have significant changes. The
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of
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cellulosic remained steady until
near
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nearly
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2000 and had minimal
improve
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in the following period. The worst
demand
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happened in wool which fluctuated and just had 1
million
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tons
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in the
last
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year.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words demand, million, tons with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "undefined" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: The word "fluctuated" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "significantly" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • Global demand
  • Textile industry
  • Natural fibers
  • Synthetic fibers
  • Manufacturing advancements
  • Fashion trends
  • Consumer preferences
  • Economic factors
  • Purchasing power
  • Eco-friendly materials
  • Market share
  • Production capacity
  • Polyester
  • Cotton
  • Wool
  • Nylon
  • Demand curve
  • Sustainability
  • Textile innovation
  • Fluctuations
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