The line graph shows the global demand of different types of textile from 1980 to 2015.
The graph below illustrates the
demand
for 4-type textile fibers
in the world from 1980 to 2015.
Change the spelling
fibres
Overall
, the picture shows that the need for polyester significantly grew, followed by cotton and cellulosic. Despite that, the demand
for wool fluctuated and had the lowest number among other fibers
.
In 1980, the consumption of cotton was the highest with more than 10 Change the spelling
fibres
million
tons
. However
, another fiber
got its Change the spelling
fibre
demand
under that number. In the following years, the need for cotton gradually rose to 27 million
tons
in nearly 2000. But, then
it dropped slightly to 22 million
tons
before jumping again in the next years to over 30 million
in 2015.
Dramatical demand
for fiber happened in polyester which just only got under 10 million
tons
in the start but had the largest number among the fibers almost 70 million
tons
at its peak in 2015. On the other hand
, cellulosic and wool did not have significant changes. The demand
of
cellulosic remained steady until Change preposition
for
near
2000 and had minimal Change the word
nearly
improve
in the following period. The worst Replace the word
improvement
demand
happened in wool which fluctuated and just had 1 million
tons
in the last
year.Submitted by dyahkusumaningrum18 on
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