The map below shows the changes that have taken place in Meadowside village and Fronton, a neighboring town, since 1962. Report the main features and make comparisions if relevant.

The map below shows the changes that have taken place in Meadowside village and Fronton, a neighboring town, since 1962. 

Report the main features and make comparisions if relevant.
These three maps illustrate how Meadowside
town
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and Fonton have been developed from 1962 and 1985 until now.
Overall
, there has been considerable growth over 61 years with more commercial and residential areas followed by roadway traffic expansion. Compared
1962
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to 1985, the Meadowside area had been expanded with the establishment of a leisure complex and a superstore to serve the residents in the housing area at the edge of the village.
Moreover
, a new road was constructed to connect Meadowside with Fonton.
However
, the middle part was an empty field that
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after 23 years. Nowadays, that small town has turned into a suburb that contains more commercial utility. The housing estate has been enlarged and moved adjacent to the main street
that is
directly opposite the superstore which remains unchanged. In the middle of the map, there is a hotel and business park recently constructed. Between the hotel and business park, a station is being built which sticks to a railway and parallel to the road.
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