The chart gives information about questionaire results for drinking habits, purchasing fresh tea, and people's coffee in five different Australian cities (Sydney,Melbourne, Brisbane, Adelaide, Hobart). Overall, it is clear from the chart the highest rate of city residents went to a cafe for drinking coffee or tea, while, the lowest rate of them purchased fresh coffee.
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The bar chart below shows the data about
coffee
and tea
buying and drinking habits in five-town
of Australia.
Correct your spelling
five towns
Overall
, the picture gives information that went
to a cafe for Wrong verb form
going
coffee
or tea
was more popular than bought
fresh or Wrong verb form
buying
instant
coffee
in Sydney, Melbourne, Brisban, and Hobart
, but not in Adelaide.
In the four cities; Sydney, Melbourne, Brisban, and Hobart
, went
to a cafe was the famous Wrong verb form
going
way
for buying
and Change preposition
to buy
drinking
Wrong verb form
drink
coffee
or tea
. Those cities also
gave same
trend that Change the article
the same
bought
Wrong verb form
buying
instant
coffee
had the higher consuments
than Correct your spelling
consumers
Correct pronoun usage
those bought
bought
Wrong verb form
buying
a
fresh Correct article usage
apply
coffee
in the last
4 weeks. Moreover
, Hobart
and Melbourn had the largerst
number of citizens who went to Correct your spelling
largest
cafe
at more than 60%, followed by Sidney and Brisbane at 60% and 55%. The second popular Fix the agreement mistake
cafes
way
to consume coffee
and tea
in those town
were Change the determiner
that town
those towns
bought
Change the verb form
to buy
instant
coffee
which Brisbane and Hobart
had more than 50% percentage.
On the other hand
, the Adelaide residents had different way
to enjoy Fix the agreement mistake
ways
coffee
or tea
which
they Correct word choice
and
choose bought
Wrong verb form
chose to buy
instant
coffee
as the
interesting Correct article usage
an
way
. Despite that, bought
fresh Wrong verb form
buying
coffee
was the least unpopular way
to drink coffee
in those 5 cities.Submitted by dyahkusumaningrum18 on
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