The graph below shows the different modes of transport used to travel to and from work in one European city in 1960, 1980 and 2000. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information below.

The graph below shows the different modes of transport used to travel to and from work in one European city in 1960, 1980 and 2000. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information below.
The bar chart depicts transport travel information in the European towns what the people had to
used
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to in
three
Correct article usage
the three
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years 1960, 1980, 2000. It is clear from the graph that, the
bus
was the most popular in 1960 and
also
cars
were the lowest used in 1960. In the year 1960, The
bus
was the most accepted and recorded the highest number in the all chart, almost 38 per
cent
. The tube was the second demand after the
bus
almost 27 per
cent
. The train recorded 19 per
cent
. The lowest popular were
cars
7 percent. In 1980, The
bus
had dropped to 27 per
cent
.
In addition
, the tube
also
decreased to 22 per
cent
, less than the
bus
. The car showed more acceptance and increased to almost 24 per
cent
. The trains had uplifted to 27 per
cent
. In 2000, The
bus
continued to decline until 15 per
cent
, in
the
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2000. Tube had gone up to 21 but still less than the 1960 rate.
Cars
recorded the highest rate in 2000 with 37 per
cent
, the
cars
also
continued to rise since 1960. Trains fell to almost 22 per
cent
,
however
, it is higher
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "also".
Vocabulary: Replace the words bus, cars, cent with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "information" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: The word "chart" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "almost" was used 4 times.

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