The graph below gives information about the percentage of the population in four Asian countries living in cities from 1970 to 2020, with prediction for 2030 and 2040.

The graph below gives information about the percentage of the population in four Asian countries living in cities from 1970 to 2020, with prediction for 2030 and 2040.
The given line graph shows information regarding the population who live in cities in four Asian states over 50 years between 1970 and 2020, including projections for the next 10 years and 20 years. Units are measured in percentage of the total population.
Overall
, it can clearly be seen that all of the countries experienced a gradual increase throughout the period, and
this
increase will continue till 2040.
Moreover
,
while
the
Philippines
was the highest percentage at the start, it had been overtaken by
Malaysia
at the end
of the period. At the beginning of the period, the
Philippines
and
Malaysia
started at around 30%, yet the
Philippines
began slightly above
Malaysia
. By 2020,
Malaysia
significantly rose and peaked at almost 80%,
while
the
Philippines
after experiencing quite substantial growth of 15% in 1990,
then
slightly plunged to approximately 45% in 2020.
On the other hand
, two countries with lower percentages at the start Thailand and Indonesia started at just below 20% and above 10%, respectively. In 2000, they both noticeably soared and converged at 30%. From
this
point onwards, Indonesia witnessed a major growth of 25% and peaked at 50%,
in contrast
with Thailand which had a steady movement until 2020. Looking forward, predictions indicate
further
growth in city populations across all four states. By 2040, it is estimated that
Malaysia
will have the largest percentage of city inhabitants, nearing 85%, followed by Indonesia at around 65%. The figures for the
Philippines
and Thailand are projected to be approximately 55% and 50%, respectively.
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