Write at least 150 words. You have recently ordered an item from the internet but are not happy with the purchase. Write to the company. In your letter •Describe what you purchased. •Explain why you are not happy with the purchase. •Tell them what you would like them to do about the situation.

#item #internet #purchase #company #•describe #•explain #•tell #situation

Dear Sir, I am writing to complain about the ordered an item from the internet but are not happy with the purchase. I bought an air purifier from our online store; I ordered it 4 days ago and I just received it today. I ordered it after learning about the quality through personal reviews of buyers and the reputation of the store recommended by friends. After testing the

product

, I feel dissatisfied with

this

product

This

device was not able to operate most effectively as introduced at the store. I don't know why

this

device often turns off after a few hours of use. I think there is damage inside

this

air purifier. I would like to return

this

product

because I cannot use the device optimally. I want to exchange for another

product

through the

product

warranty because I think it was damaged internally

due to

a manufacturer error. I trust

this

matter will be resolved soon. Yours faithfully, Le Huy Gia Hoang

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2Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
1Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
0Grammar mistakes
 

8 paragraphs

164 words

7.50

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 5.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

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