You recently had a holiday visiting your friends and you stayed in their house. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter: 1. Thank your friend for staying with them. 2. Tell them what you enjoyed most about the holiday 3. Explain you are sending photos of the holiday with the letter

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Dear Abhinav, How are you? I’ve reached Abu Dhabi and find myself already missing your company. It was really a generous offer to leave me at your place in Dubai. You’ve pampered me so well that I feel thoroughly rejuvenated and refreshed after the holidays. I must thank you for giving me the best holiday ever.
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, visiting a city like Dubai would have never been affordable if you hadn’t allowed me to stay with you. I can’t stop thinking of the places I visited there, especially the desert safari you’ve arranged. I had a lot of fun as
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was the first time, I had done adventures like jeep safari, dune bashing and sand skating. Do you remember the local attire we wore there? Anyway, I’ve been going through the camera and found some pictures of us during my stay which you hadn’t seen, so I’m sending them over with the letter. I think they will remind us of the wonderful moments we had together. See you next summer, till
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have a happy time. Best Regards, Rubina

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task achievement
Try to make the closing sentence a bit more personal or warm to enhance the tone.
coherence and cohesion
Consider adding a brief introductory sentence about your feelings when you arrived at your friend's place for better engagement.
task achievement
The letter has a warm and appreciative tone, effectively expressing gratitude.
coherence and cohesion
The use of personal anecdotes, like the desert safari, adds depth to the description of your holiday experience.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • grateful
  • hospitality
  • memorable
  • activities
  • cherished
  • bonding
  • delightful
  • explore
  • experience
  • photographs
  • reminiscing
  • treasured moments
  • return the favor
  • inviting
  • appreciate
  • kindness
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