You recently had a holiday visiting your friends and you stayed in their house. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter: 1. Thank your friend for staying with them. 2. Tell them what you enjoyed most about the holiday 3. Explain you are sending photos of the holiday with the letter

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Dear Abhinav, How are you? I’ve reached Abu Dhabi and find myself already missing your company. It was really a generous offer to leave me at your place in Dubai. You’ve pampered me so well that I feel thoroughly rejuvenated and refreshed after the holidays. I must thank you for giving me the best holiday ever.

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, visiting a city like Dubai would have never been affordable if you hadn’t allowed me to stay with you. I can’t stop thinking of the places I visited there, especially the desert safari you’ve arranged. I had a lot of fun as

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was the first time, I had done adventures like jeep safari, dune bashing and sand skating. Do you remember the local attire we wore there? Anyway, I’ve been going through the camera and found some pictures of us during my stay which you hadn’t seen, so I’m sending them over with the letter. I think they will remind us of the wonderful moments we had together. See you next summer, till

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have a happy time. Best Regards, Rubina

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Try to make the closing sentence a bit more personal or warm to enhance the tone.

coherence and cohesion

Consider adding a brief introductory sentence about your feelings when you arrived at your friend's place for better engagement.

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The letter has a warm and appreciative tone, effectively expressing gratitude.

coherence and cohesion

The use of personal anecdotes, like the desert safari, adds depth to the description of your holiday experience.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

7 paragraphs

179 words

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