Some people think that the best way to succeed is to get a university education, while others disagree and say that it is no longer true nowadays. Discuss both views and give your own opinions.

Evaluation the best way to succeed is challenging,

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, attending a college or university is an option for getting knowledge and experience at the same time ,in consequence,students would prefer to be

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of their community ,but, there is an alternative road that deviates from old one and some follower of

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way has been proposed for being a successful person ,an individual does not need to attend in academic places ,

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, I completely disagree with

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status, and I will give my reasons. In the beginning, humans learned natural phenomena could be able to live and escape distinction ,

for example

, learning to provide a fire for cooking , be warmth during winter sessions and build houses to leave caves ,so, human wisdom and all of these experiences have written in our books which called science field ,so , for being a better professionalist as engineers who are be able to build roads and houses ,as a medical doctor who could bring health to us ,etc,attending in a higher level of education would seem necessary .

Although

, opponents have claimed our achievements regarding techniques and scientific topics are enough and there is no need to learn more about facts and create more innovations for our world ,because , nowadays , the cost of courses at universities is rising and the majority of the population has not been able to pay the expense ,

secondly

, some traditional beliefs are deviated that have imagined science is a source of anarchy in our world and maybe some people have protested against science in wrong assumption . Both views have their own reasons ,

however

, the logical reasons for the second group belonging to poverty in percept the reality of the world and their weaknesses in paying for expenses might be a source of these ideas , and for the first idea that assumed the education in higher level is needed to support our life in a better direction is a true fact ,

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, competition behaviours among learners and countries as well might be destroyed the road of progress and wellness. In conclusion, I believe education is the best opportunity that everyone could have in their own life ,

however

, obstacles on

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road are going to be untolerated by people not anymore.