Many people no longer read newspapers or watch TV news programmes. Instead they get news about the world from the Internet. Is this a positive or negative development?
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receive knowledge and information
has dramatically changed. Most people
obtain news from the Internet
rather than read newspapers or watch television channels. Personally, this
will definitely have a negative impact on obtaining information
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information
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and some
in contrast
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situation.
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, its potential risk, for instance
, wrong messages to the public and negative information
which could affect children's growth could not be ignored and should be limited.Submitted by chaoweikevin on
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