The graph below shows average carbon dioxide (CO2), emissions per person in the United Kingdom, Sweden, Italy and Portugal Between 1967 and 2007. Summarise the infomation by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparions where relevant.

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The line graph illustrates the average

carbon

footprint of residents in four

Europian

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countries between 1967 and 2007.

Overall

, it is

evidents

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evident

evidence

that

citizens

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the citizens

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of Portugal and Italy increased their average

carbon

dioxide

emmissions

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emissions

from the beginning of

the

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1967 until the end of 2007 and Swedish and British settlers decreased their

carbon

emmisions

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emissions

in the mentioned period.

First,

according to

the graph, Portuguese households' average

carbon

emmisions

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emissions

per person

climed

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climbed

claimed

gradually from

the

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mid 1967 to 1997

reached

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and reached

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its peak of 5.5 metric

tonnes

then

, it showed a negligible rise by the end of 2007.

Furthermore

Italians

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Italians'

Italian's

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carbon

footprints were 4.2 metric

tonnes

in 1967 and

this

gigure

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figure

rose slightly by 1997 as well.

However

this

number remained

steadily

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until 2007.

On the other hand

, Sweden and UK inhabitants were the

contries

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countries

which displayed

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reduction in the amount of

carbon

emissions during 40 years. British houseowners' average

carbon

footprint

were

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10.5 metric

tonnes

and decreased

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by 2

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levels and reached

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8.5. Ultimately,

co2

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CO2

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emissions of households in Sweden jumped to 10.4 in 1977 but displayed a sharp decrease to a mere 5 metric

tonnes

by 2007.

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