The graph below shows average carbon dioxide (CO2), emissions per person in the United Kingdom, Sweden, Italy and Portugal Between 1967 and 2007. Summarise the infomation by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparions where relevant.
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The line graph illustrates the average
carbon
footprint of residents in four Europian
countries between 1967 and 2007.
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European
Overall
, it is evidents
that Correct your spelling
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evidence
citizens
of Portugal and Italy increased their average Correct article usage
the citizens
carbon
dioxide emmissions
from the beginning of Correct your spelling
emissions
the
1967 until the end of 2007 and Swedish and British settlers decreased their Change the article
apply
carbon
emmisions
in the mentioned period.
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emissions
First,
according to
the graph, Portuguese households' average carbon
emmisions
per person Correct your spelling
emissions
climed
gradually from Correct your spelling
climbed
claimed
the
mid 1967 to 1997 Change the article
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reached
its peak of 5.5 metric Correct word choice
and reached
tonnes
, then
, it showed a negligible rise by the end of 2007. Furthermore
, Italians
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Italians'
Italian's
carbon
footprints were 4.2 metric tonnes
in 1967 and this
gigure
rose slightly by 1997 as well. Correct your spelling
figure
However
, this
number remained steadily
until 2007.
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On the other hand
, Sweden and UK inhabitants were the contries
which displayed Correct your spelling
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an
reduction in the amount of Change the article
a
carbon
emissions during 40 years. British houseowners' average carbon
footprint were
10.5 metric Change the verb form
was
tonnes
and decreased 2
levels and reached Change preposition
by 2
to
8.5. Ultimately, Change preposition
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co2
emissions of households in Sweden jumped to 10.4 in 1977 but displayed a sharp decrease to a mere 5 metric Correct your spelling
CO2
tonnes
by 2007.Submitted by sarina.chenare78 on
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