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The charts illustrate the number of people who were affected by four types of noise pollution in day and night in cities and rural areas in 2007.

The charts illustrate the number of people who were affected by four types of noise pollution in day and night in cities and rural areas in 2007.
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The provided charts illustrate data about the number of
people
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 in urban and rural
areas
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 who were affected by types of
noise
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pollution
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 between
day
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 and
night
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 in 2007.
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, it is apparent that traffic was the main source of
noise
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 which irritates
people
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 the most, followed by three other types of
noise
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 sources in both city and countryside
areas
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. Another interesting perspective is that it is much noisier during the
day
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 than at
night
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 in either area. Looking at the details, traffic in the city had the biggest number of
pollution
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, affecting 64
million
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people
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 during the
day
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 and 48
million
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people
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 during the
night
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 in 2007. Rural figures for traffic
noise
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 were nearly half the amount of the city during the
day
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 and
night
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.
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, train noises in the urban area produced
pollution
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 affecting 10
million
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people
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 in the daytime and 8
million
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people
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 at
night
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. In rural
areas
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,
this
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 figure was slightly lower with 8
million
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 and 6
million
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people
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 in daylight and
night
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, respectively. During the
day
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, 4
million
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 individuals in urban regions and 2
million
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people
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 in rural
areas
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 were affected by aircraft
noise
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pollution
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. These figures for both urban and rural
areas
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 were one
million
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 at
night
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.
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 industry
noise
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 did not influence rural
areas
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, it affected 1
million
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people
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 during the
day
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 and 0.25
million
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people
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 at
night
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 in metropolitan
areas
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.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words people, areas, noise, pollution, day, night, million with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "figures" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 2 times.
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