Weather is
one
of
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elements on
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sinceChange preposition
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its influence
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. Many people
then
, claim that rain is everyone's best friend.
However
, I disagree
the statement. I believe that
besideChange preposition
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the benefits, too much
rainsFix the agreement mistake
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give the drawbacks
also
.
While
pouring water gives benefits to the crops, which is
one
of the human's basic needs, the sunlight has more contribution to farmers. The warmth and the shine from the sun are needed for plants to grow,
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results in good products.
For example
, without
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sunlightsFix the agreement mistake
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, leaves would not be able to process
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which
impacting toWrong verb form
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failed crops.
On the other hand
, rain leads to different
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of disasters.
One
main disaster
that is
caused by rainfall is flood. Jakarta,
for example
, is
one
city where flooding always occurs whenever
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season starts.
This
situation will
then
affect
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more health and economic issues.
Moreover
,
landslideFix the agreement mistake
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as well as
storms are the other disasters where heavy rainfalls are the main cause.
To sum up
,
while
the wet season gives some advantages to
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life, it is not the most essential factor. There are other aspects that
needsChange the verb form
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to be considered on
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,
such
as the sun for crops.
In addition
, too
muchChange the quantifier
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raindrops often lead to disasters.