Rain is our best friend. Do you agree or disagree?

Weather is

one

of

important

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elements on

earth

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since

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because of

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its influence

to

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on

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the environments

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environments

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. Many people

then

, claim that rain is everyone's best friend.

However

, I disagree

witht

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with

the statement. I believe that

beside

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the benefits, too much

rains

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rain

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give the drawbacks

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also

.

While

pouring water gives benefits to the crops, which is

one

of the human's basic needs, the sunlight has more contribution to farmers. The warmth and the shine from the sun are needed for plants to grow,

that

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which

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results in good products.

For example

, without

the

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apply

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sunlights

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sunlight

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, leaves would not be able to process

the

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photosyntesis

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photosynthesis

which

impacting to

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impacts

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failed crops.

On the other hand

, rain leads to different

kind

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kinds

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of disasters.

One

main disaster

that is

caused by rainfall is flood. Jakarta,

for example

, is

one

city where flooding always occurs whenever

wet

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the wet

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season starts.

This

situation will

then

affect

to

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more health and economic issues.

Moreover

,

landslide

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landslides

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as well as

storms are the other disasters where heavy rainfalls are the main cause.

To sum up

,

while

the wet season gives some advantages to

human's

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human

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life, it is not the most essential factor. There are other aspects that

needs

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to be considered on

earth

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Earth

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,

such

as the sun for crops.

In addition

, too

much

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raindrops often lead to disasters.