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The pie charts show information about energy production in a country in two separate years. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, by make comparisons where relevant.

The pie charts show information about energy production in a country in two separate years. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, by make comparisons where relevant.
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The pie
charts
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 compare the source of
energy
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 in a specific country in 1995 and 2005. Looking from an
overall
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 perspective,
energy
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 in
this
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 country was primarily sourced from coal and gas in both selected years.
In addition
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 to
this
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, all the sources in the provided
charts
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 saw an upward trend, except for Petro. It is evidently apparent from the
charts
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 that
energy
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 was predominantly produced from coal, with 29.80% and 30.93% of the total amount of
energy
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 manufactured from
this
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 in 1995 and 2005, respectively. That was closely followed by gas which accounted for 29.63% of
energy
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 generation in 1995 and 30.31% in 2005, representing the second-most-popular
energy
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 source in both years. Nuclear power contributed only 6.40% of the 1995
energy
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while
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 by 2005, the figure for
this
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 had increased by 4.6% and reached 10.10%.
In contrast
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, the percentage of
energy
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 transformed from Petro indicates the most dramatic drop compared to other sources in the
charts
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, falling significantly from 29.27% to 19.55% between 1995 and 2005.

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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words charts, energy with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "charts" was used 4 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "compare" was used 2 times.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • proportion
  • percentage
  • increase
  • decrease
  • production
  • energy source
  • fossil fuels
  • renewable energy
  • non-renewable energy
  • comparison
  • major/minor changes
  • phased out
  • introduced
  • contribution
  • total energy output
  • environmental impact
  • economic impact
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