The first chart below shows how energy is used in an average Australian household. The second chart shows the greenhouse gas emissions which result from this energy use.
the pie charts compare the mean of power consumption in terms of domestic
appliances
in Australia and the amount
of greenhouse gas produced through each of them.
Overall
, heating has the highest amount
of using electricity, however
, water heating has the most negative effect on air pollution. on the other hand
, cooling is the least harmful activity for both using resources and producing waste.
according to
the first chart, heating ranks as the most significant domestic activity which is consuming electricity, at 42%. following which, water heating stands in second place, at 30%. the share of other appliances
accounted for half as high as the latter. refrigeration, lightening, and cooling are 7%, 4%, and 2%, respectively.
regarding the amount
of gas emission, the most harmful appliances
are water heating and other appliances
, responsible for half of all. heating and refrigeration share the same amount
of around 15%. ultimately, the figure for lightening and cooling accounts for the lowest at 8% and 3%.Submitted by soltaninejad_sahel on
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