The graph below shows the number of books read by men and women at Burnaby Public Library from 2011 to 2014. Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The graph line depicts the number of
books
read by females and males at Burnaby Public Library from 2011 until 2014. It is clear from the graph that all lines started increasing from 2011 until 2013.
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Men
began reading nearly 3000 Use synonyms
books
in 2011 and Use synonyms
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increased to 4000 Linking Words
books
in 2012. In 2013 the males recorded the same number of read Use synonyms
books
as the females which approximately 10000 Use synonyms
books
for all genders. In 2014 Use synonyms
men
climbed to 14000 Use synonyms
books
.
Women started with nearly 5000 Use synonyms
books
in 2011 which Use synonyms
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is higher
men
in 2011. In 2012 the number continued increasing, Use synonyms
in addition
, it was higher than Linking Words
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men
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for men
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, in 2013 the two genders met at the same point Linking Words
10000
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of 10000
books
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then
the women's line dropped to under 8000 Linking Words
books
in 2014.
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To sum up
, we could say that women started higher than Linking Words
men
until 2013, Use synonyms
however
, they declined in 2014.Linking Words
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