The graph below shows the number of books read by men and women at Burnaby Public Library from 2011 to 2014. Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The graph line depicts the number of
books
read by females and males at Burnaby Public Library from 2011 until 2014. It is clear from the graph that all lines started increasing from 2011 until 2013.
Men
began reading nearly 3000 books
in 2011 and this
increased to 4000 books
in 2012. In 2013 the males recorded the same number of read books
as the females which approximately 10000 books
for all genders. In 2014 men
climbed to 14000 books
.
Women started with nearly 5000 books
in 2011 which higher
than Add a missing verb
is higher
men
in 2011. In 2012 the number continued increasing, in addition
, it was higher than men
. Change preposition
for men
Moreover
, in 2013 the two genders met at the same point 10000
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of 10000
books
, then
the women's line dropped to under 8000 books
in 2014.
To sum up
, we could say that women started higher than men
until 2013, however
, they declined in 2014.Submitted by Yousef
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