the diagrams below show the riverpark area of 20 years ago and the riverpark area now
The diagram illustrates the comparison of the layout of the
river
park in the last
20 years and the newest in these current days.
Overall
, it is clear that
there are huge improvements in the layout involving the addition of community services, such
as shops, a supermarket and a post office.
First of all, 20 years ago, the area where it is a river
park currently had only a railway track. However
, nowadays, new roads and buildings have been built in a river
park area. Estuary Road is one of the streets that is
situated along the sea and the river
and next to the Marina which can make visitors enjoy the beautiful scene of the sea and have a walk along the corniche while
they are on a relaxed trip. In addition
, there are a good number of services that are sited around the corniche and near Sunset Street, such
as shops and a supermarket, which can serve people to buy their snacks while
they are enjoying their trip.
Furthermore
, there are some premises, like a post office, a library, a doctors' surgery and a college, that are located beside the
Sun Road. Opposite Estuary Street, a birdhouse has been structured in the middle of trees, which gives visitors a natural scene.Correct article usage
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