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The tables below give information about sales of fairtrade labeled coffee and bananas in 1999 and 2004 in five European countries.

The tables below give information about sales of fairtrade labeled coffee and bananas in 1999 and 2004 in five European countries.
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The tables give information approximately
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sales
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the sales
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 of
Fairtrade_labelled
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Fairtrade labelled
coffee
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 and
bananas
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 in
period
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the period
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 1994
from
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to
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 2004 in some European
countries
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.
Overall
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,
it is clear that
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 of the
sales
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coffee
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 in five European
countries
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,
UK
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the UK
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sales
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 marginally more than other
countries
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,
while
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 four
countries
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sales
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 slightly.
Furthermoe
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Furthermore
, about business
bananas
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,
UK
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 purchases dramatically more than four
countries
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, other
countries
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sales
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 more and less
bananas
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. Looking at the details, about
sales
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coffee
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 between 1999 and 2004. UK
sales
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 marginally a
half decade
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. After that, Denmark improved
buying
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by buying
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coffee
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 three times in 5 years.
By contrast
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, some
countries
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 business slightly in
period
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 1999 to 2004 With
regards
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regard
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 to
sales
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bananas
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of bananas
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 in five European
countries
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. United Kingdom
sales
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 dramatically more than other
countries
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 almost 35 more a
half decade
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half-decade
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, Switzerland and Denmark increased almost four times in
period
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.
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, Belgium and
Sweden
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 purchases go down slightly
bananas
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 between 1999
from
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and
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 2004.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words sales, coffee, bananas, countries with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "almost" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "dramatically" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "slightly" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "marginally" was used 2 times.
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