You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The diagram below shows how to recycle organic waste to produce garden fertilizer (compost). Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 words. Writing Task 1
The illustration demonstrates the production of garden fertilizers from recyclable organic waste.
Overall
, it is a 5-step, lineer
, man-made process, starting with waste, grass, food, glass, nitrogen and water to produce compost Correct your spelling
linear
at the end
of the process.
First of all, a plastic
container
with multiple holes providing air circulation is provided and then
2 different layers about 15 centimeters
each that Change the spelling
centimetres
are containing
newspaper, glass and grass are prepared before the next step. Wrong verb form
contain
Therefore
, waste is added into the plastic
container
that already preserving
some compost ingredients.
Wrong verb form
preserves
The next step is
adding nitrogen and hot water into the plastic
container
. This
step followed
by closing the top of the Add a missing verb
is followed
plastic
container
in order to enhance heating
process. After 6 months the end product, compost, is ready to use in Correct article usage
the heating
garden
.Add an article
the garden
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Introduction: The introduction is missing.
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Introduction: Change the first sentence in the introduction.
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Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
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Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words plastic, container with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Only 2 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the first paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
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