You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The diagram below shows how to recycle organic waste to produce garden fertilizer (compost). Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 words. Writing Task 1

You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.

The diagram below shows how to recycle organic waste to produce garden fertilizer (compost).

Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

You should write at least 150 words.

Writing Task 1
The illustration demonstrates the production of garden fertilizers from recyclable organic waste.
Overall
, it is a 5-step,
lineer
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linear
, man-made process, starting with waste, grass, food, glass, nitrogen and water to produce compost
at the end
of the process. First of all, a
plastic
container
with multiple holes providing air circulation is provided and
then
2 different layers about 15
centimeters
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centimetres
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each that
are containing
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contain
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newspaper, glass and grass are prepared before the next step.
Therefore
, waste is added into the
plastic
container
that already
preserving
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preserves
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some compost ingredients.
The next step is
adding nitrogen and hot water into the
plastic
container
.
This
step
followed
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is followed
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by closing the top of the
plastic
container
in order to enhance
heating
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the heating
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process. After 6 months the end product, compost, is ready to use in
garden
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the garden
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.
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Introduction: The introduction is missing.
Introduction: Change the first sentence in the introduction.
Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
Vocabulary: Replace the words plastic, container with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Only 2 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the first paragraph.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • recycle
  • organic waste
  • garden fertilizer
  • compost
  • diagram
  • main features
  • comparisons
  • overview
  • collection
  • shredding
  • mixing
  • addition
  • water
  • bacteria
  • turning
  • aerating
  • pile
  • maturation
  • filtering
  • final product
  • before and after
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