The chart below gives information about on the percentage of British people giving money to charity by age range for the year 1990 and 2010.
The bar graph illustrates the proportion of British
people
from different age groups donating money to charities between 1990 and 2010. Overall
, the population between 36-50 and 51-65 contributed the most significant amount of money to charities. Individuals who were between 18 and 25 years
old donated the lowest fractions in both years
.
In 1990, the proportion of people
aged between 36 and 50 years
old was just above 40%, this
ratio followed by the 51-65 years
old group
and the 65 years
old and older group
with 35 and around 32% respectively. People
between 26 and 35 years
old was
just above 30% and the youngest Correct subject-verb agreement
were
group
of 18-25 years
old was roughly 17%.
After two decades, the proportion of people
ranged
51-65 Wrong verb form
ranging
years
old replaced its 36-50 years
old counterpart as the most dominant population donating money to charity with just under 40%. The group
of people
between 18-25 years
old saw the most dramatic drop of around 10% over the 20 years
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