The chart below gives information about on the percentage of British people giving money to charity by age range for the year 1990 and 2010.

The chart below gives information about on the percentage of British people giving money to charity by age range for the year 1990 and 2010.
The bar graph illustrates the proportion of British
people
from different age groups donating money to charities between 1990 and 2010.
Overall
, the population between 36-50 and 51-65 contributed the most significant amount of money to charities. Individuals who were between 18 and 25
years
old donated the lowest fractions in both
years
. In 1990, the proportion of
people
aged between 36 and 50
years
old was just above 40%,
this
ratio followed by the 51-65
years
old
group
and the 65
years
old and older
group
with 35 and around 32% respectively.
People
between 26 and 35
years
old
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just above 30% and the youngest
group
of 18-25
years
old was roughly 17%. After two decades, the proportion of
people
ranged
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51-65
years
old replaced its 36-50
years
old counterpart as the most dominant population donating money to charity with just under 40%. The
group
of
people
between 18-25
years
old saw the most dramatic drop of around 10% over the 20
years
.
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