The graph below shows the number of books read by men and women at Burnaby Public Library from 2011 to 2014. Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The given line chart depicts the comparison between
books
red
by men and women at Burnaby Public Library in 4 years.
Correct your spelling
read
Overall
, the number of books
read by men shows an increasing trend over the period, while
the women presents
the fall after 2013.
There were around 3000 Change the verb form
present
books
that were read by men in 2011. The number gradually increased to 4000 in a year. However
, the
significant rise was shown in 2012, Correct article usage
a
where
it went up Correct word choice
when
for
more than double in a year. Change preposition
by
Finally
, it improved to 14,000 in 2014.
On the other hand
, women spent around 5000 articles in 2011. There was then
an upward trend in 2013, which it
rose twice as Correct pronoun usage
apply
many
as in 2011. Correct quantifier usage
much
However
, the number went down after reaching the peak to
around 7000 Change preposition
of
books
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Vocabulary: The word "trend" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "went up" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 3 times.
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