the chart shows that male and female teacheres in six different types of educational setting in the UK in 2010
The bar chart illustrates the distribution of tutors by gender in six various forms of educational level in the UK during 2010.
Overall
, while
the chart shows that females working as teachers outnumbered males in nursery and primary school, the rates of men
working as tutors in secondary school were quite similar. Other than that, the number of men
working in high-level education was higher than women
. Whereas
there was no significant difference between those two gender at college.
To begin
with, there were dramatically more women
than men
teaching in the nursery and primary school with females making up around 90 and 95% respectively. Furthermore
, the chart also
shows that the percentage of men
only had a slight difference with women
at around 50%. Additionally
, the only category with men
holding exactly the same number of positions as women
was at the college.
In contrast
, the most popular occupancies for men
were working as tutors in high-level education such
as Private Training institutes and at the university, which contributed to around 50% and 70% respectively. While
the distribution of males working at universities doubled more than females, there was no difference in the number of those two gender
working at colleges.Fix the agreement mistake
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