The map below is of the town of Garlsdon. A new supermarket (S) is planned for the town. The map shows two possible sites for the supermarket.
This
map depicts the layout of two possible Linking Words
location
of Change to a plural noun
locations
supermarket
in Garlsdon City.
Fix the agreement mistake
supermarkets
Overall
, it is clearly apparent that the location of s1 and s2 is opposite of each other, S1 is located in the suburban area, Linking Words
meanwhile
s2 is in the heart of the town.
Turning our attention to s1 that Add a comma
meanwhile,
take
place Correct subject-verb agreement
takes
in
the Change preposition
on
north west
side of the maps, it Correct your spelling
northwest
have
its own advantage Change the verb form
has
eventhough
Correct your spelling
even though
its
quite far from Correct your spelling
it's
metropolitan
area. On the left, it is close to Add an article
the metropolitan
a metropolitan
railway
and on the Correct article usage
the railway
right
it is next to Hindon that have around 10.000 citizens. Moving to S2, it is the best location since it is located in the middle of the town Add a comma
right,
center
and in there, there is no traffic zone and have Change the spelling
centre
close
distance to Add an article
a close
the close
railway
it Correct article usage
the railway
Linking Words
also
quite close the Add a missing verb
is also
the
Remove the redundancy
apply
neighboring
cities, it takes 16 Change the spelling
neighbouring
kilometers
from Brandson and 25 Change the spelling
kilometres
kilometers
from Change the spelling
kilometres
Crandson
. Correct your spelling
Grandson
Linking Words
This
two cities all have Correct determiner usage
These
general
population above 10.000. Add an article
a general
In addition
Linking Words
to
s2 Change preposition
apply
take
place near the housing in the south side of the city.Correct subject-verb agreement
takes
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