The graph below shows annual water usage (in millions of cubic meters) by industries in some countries
The graph shows information about the number of annual utilizing
water
by various types of industries
such
as fuel, foods and drinks, machinery, metal, chemicals, paper, and textiles in some nations. As can be seen from the graphs, it is obvious that the highest water
usage of industries
is chemicals in both groundwater
and public supply.
In detail, the least amount
of water
usage in public supply is fuel and textiles at the same amount
with 10 while
fuel in groundwater
uses water
with 70 or amount
of seven times and textiles with 80 or amount
of eight times as public supply.
Looking at details, the highest annual utilised water
by industries
is chemicals in both groundwater
and public supply, with 430 and 240 respectively. Machinery which uses water
in public supply is ten times as in groundwater
, with composed 100 to 10.
In conclusion, groundwater
is the main source for most industries
, except food/drinks and machinery.Submitted by champperkhu on
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