The line graph below compares the Gross Domestic Product (GDP) in four countries in billions of US dollar.

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The graph gives information about the Gross Domestic Product (GDP) in a number of countries (

Bangladesh

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Pakistan

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, Nepal, and Malaysia) between 2010 and 2015. In summary, it can be seen that

Bangladesh

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Pakistan

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, and Malaysia had

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positive growth,

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Nepal

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stucked

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within six years. In reference to

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and

Pakistan

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, the country's revenue constantly surged, in which

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increased from just above a hundred in 2010 to 200 in 2015 and

Pakistan

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grew from under 200 in 2015 multiplied one and a half times in 2015.

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, Malaysia had

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pattern with a constant climb from 2010 to 2014,

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decreased in 2015.

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, the number still showed a positive trend from below 300 in 2010 to exactly 300 in 2015.

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, the economic condition in Nepal did not seem to have any progress

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throughout

the years. The GDP stayed in a range of slightly above zero from 2010 to 2015.

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Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

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Lexical resource: 5.0

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Topic Vocabulary:

Gross Domestic Product
economic performance
growth rate
stagnation
trend analysis
fluctuations
economic boom
recession
industrial sectors
projection
fiscal policy
economic indicator
per capita income
purchasing power parity
upward trend
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The line graph below compares the Gross Domestic Product (GDP) in four countries in billions of US dollar.

Write a letter to a friend. You have borrowed something from your friend and it got damaged. a) apologize for damaging the product b) explain what happened c) say how are you going to fix the issue

Some people think that private companies should not be allowed to carry out any technology. Only the government can do it. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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