The following map details a town now and a proposed future layout. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The following map details a town now and a proposed future layout. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The supplied map gives information about the current layout for a town
as well as
the proposed future plan. Looking from an
overall
perspective, it is readily apparent that it will not be a significant change for the future design. New roads would be added. In the present day, there is an airfield on the northwest side of the plane connected with a road along the west(A2),
furthermore
, there is a roundabout joining the railway adjacent to a gas station. In the future, the airfield would be replaced with industrial estates and connected the railway by a new street on the east side. Another roundabout would be constructed in the middle of the railway. In the easternmost, there is a town
center
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surrounded by a build-up area ring road. Two roads will be added. The first one(A4) would be connected with the road (A2). The second street on the east side would be accessible to people outside the town
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