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The graph below shows the number of tourists visiting a particular Caribbean island between 2010 and 2017. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph below shows the number of tourists visiting a particular Caribbean island between 2010 and 2017. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The line chart illustrates how many tourists visited Caribbean islands over a
period
 of seven years.
Overall
, it is evident that
people
 became more interested in visiting
this
island
 during the
period
 mentioned. At
first,
people
 were more drawn to stay on the
island
,
however
, by the end of the
period
, they
more
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preferred to stay on cruise ships. It can be observed from the chart that the total number of
people
 who visited the
island
 witnessed a moderate increase over the entire
period
. Between 2010 and 2015, the figure grew to approximately 2.75
million
visitors
, after which it remained almost constant until 2016. In the subsequent years, the corresponding figure increased rapidly by nearly 0.75
million
 until 2017. In 2010, the number of
visitors
 who chose to stay on the
island
 was more than that of
people
 who wanted to stay on cruise ships. In the next five years, both figures reached nearly 1.75
million
visitors
. Interestingly, from 2016 onwards, the number of
visitors
 choosing to stay on cruise ships exceeded and reached 2
million
 by the end of the
period
,
whereas
 the figure for
visitors
 staying on the
the
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island
 stood at 1.5
million
 in 2017.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words period, people, island, million, visitors with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "chart" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "figure" was used 4 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increase" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "reached" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "stay" was used 5 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "nearly" was used 2 times.
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