school children are using computers in school more than ever. Discuss the advantages and disadvantage of this and give your own opinions

In

this

modern era, an increasing number of time by

student

for using

computer

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computers

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to help them with

school

task

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tasks

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and daily

activity

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. In

this

essay,

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will explain the potential benefits and drawbacks regarding

this

issue with supporting opinions. On the one hand,

computers

make pupils become

dependen

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dependent

independent

with

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this device

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these devices

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and some

disadvantage

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disadvantages

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may occur because of

this

habit.

Firstly

,

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the computer

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computer

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computers

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used

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are used

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to help

student

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students

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for

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writing any task,

as a

consequence

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they may have some

problem

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problems

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with handwriting.

Secondly

,

computers

can be used for searching anything,

therefore

pupils

are not encourage

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are not encouraged

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to search it manually from other sources like books or journals. To illustrate,

student

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nowadays can

be easily search

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easily search

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any

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for any

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homework

answer

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answers

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through the internet, by

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and paste without any citation,

thus

this

condition can lead to plagiarism

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issues

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.

On the other hand

,

computers

also

help students to support their academic

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.

Firstly

,

student

not

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resposible

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responsible

to bring

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a lot of physical books to

school

because

it

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can be substituted by e-books accessed from their

computers

.

Secondly

, pupils can get more resources of study references and learning

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resources

from

internet

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.

Moreover

, schools

also

have

an

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learning system that may help

student

to submit their tasks and

paperless

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be paperless

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.

For instance

,

school

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schools

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nowadays try to

recude

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receive

paper

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papers

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therefore

they subscribe to

google

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school

to help them manage

student

task

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tasks

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or homework. In conclusion,

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computers

at

school

may give numerous demerits

such

as

lack

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of handwriting and instant

solution

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solutions

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.

However

,

this

situation

also

brings several merits to help

student

minimize the physical books and

boarden

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broaden

their learning sources.

Therefore

, on balance, I remain firmly convinced that the idea of using

computers

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more advantages than

the

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disadvantages.