The diagram below shows how instant noodles are manufactured. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The diagram below shows how instant noodles are manufactured.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The diagram illustrates the process of producing instant noodles in the factory.
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, the different materials are manufactured in 8 steps which start with flour, and by
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the process ends. In the beginning, the flour is moved to storage soils by a special machine.
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material by water and oil are mixed, and
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rollers relocated to dough sheets to be ready for dough strips. In the next stage, dough strips are converted to noodles discs. Following that, by oil cooking and drying are become cups. In the penultimate step, cups are prepared with vegetables and spices to be ready for labelling. Eventually, after 2 actions which are labelled and sealed, the final material be ready to get to the different shopping. To put it in a nutshell, it can be seen that,
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process contains 8 steps with mixed a lot of material for preparing instant noodles by manufacturing, and the diagram shows us the final produced material from flour converted to glass shape.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 67%.
Vocabulary: Only 4 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: The word "diagram" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • Manufacturing process
  • Noodle dough
  • Steaming
  • Cutting
  • Dough sheeting
  • Molding
  • Air-drying
  • Frying
  • Seasoning
  • Quality control
  • Packaging
  • Shelf life
  • Flavoring agents
  • Texture
  • Instant meal
  • Convenience food
  • Production line
  • Consumer
  • Ingredient mixing
  • Safety standards
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