The three pie charts show different accommodation choices by holidaymakers in the three years 1965, 1985 and 2005. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and making relevant comparisons.

The three pie charts show different accommodation choices by holidaymakers in the three years 1965, 1985 and 2005. 

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and making relevant comparisons.
The given pie charts showcase the preferences of holidaymakers in their accommodation in three different years, decades apart from each other.
Overall
, the majority of people preferred staying in the hotels in the years 1985 and 2005 as compared to 1965, where the majority preferred staying with their friends and relatives. The majority of holidaymakers chose to stay with their
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in 1965 with 55% of the total.
However
, the number kept decreasing with 35% in 1985 and 30% in 2005. Clearly, hotels got a primary shift of interest continuously with 16% in 1965 to 37% in 1985 and
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, to 38% in 2005. Camping and caravans saw a zigzag in the pattern as far as the
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of the holidaymakers
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concerned. With 15% to 18% to 12% in camping and 14% to 10% to 20% in caravans in the years 1965, 1975 and 1985 respectively, the choices kept on swerving.
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