The diagram below shows the manufacturing process for making sugar from sugar cane.
The procedure depicts the stages for making white
sugar
from sugar
cane. Overall
, it is clearly seen this
development has seven steps from growing the plant until it is ready to consume.
First and foremost, sugar
canes which have grown for 12 to 18 months are ready to be harvested and collected. After that, it needs a machine to take the juice out from the cane, this
step is called crushing. Next,
the juice begins to be filtered by a limestone filter in this
purifying stage. After
this
case is done, the raw juice is evaporated by heat to become syrup or thick liquid. Then
, the crystal from the sugar
needs to be separated from the syrup to get the best quality sugar
. Last
but not least, the sugar
liquid can get into the cooling and drying action in order to get the sugar
that usually markets require.
To draw the conclusion, the action of making sugar
is not that simple, it takes a lot of moments and time to create the sweet sugar
which everybody has in their house.Submitted by syifensaft
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