Some people believe that it is best to accept a bad situation, such as an unsatisfactory job or shortage of money. Others argue that it is better to try and improve such situations. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
Some people are of the opinion that the best way is
deal
with bad situations Fix the infinitive
to deal
such
as lack of money and doing some job that we are not satisfied with. But some others believe that if do effort and try to improve situations it will be better. I have a balanced idea, and in this
essay will discuss this
topic in my personal view in detail.
On the one hand, it is necessary to know our shortages and some problems that we faced
on them. the initial thing is not to Wrong verb form
face
be ignored
our problems and we have not to escape that, so if some bad things exist in our lives, Wrong verb form
ignore
the first step
is accept
that. So it is plausible that many people assume, the best way to change something is Change the verb form
is to accept
deal
with that, but they do not know about the rest of Fix the infinitive
to deal
Correct article usage
the way
way
that could change our situation and convert to perfect Fix the agreement mistake
ways
circumstance
. Fix the agreement mistake
circumstances
in
terms Capitalize word
In
to
lack of money, it can be certainly said that, if we just accept issues and do nothing for it, definitely it will not going well.
Change preposition
of
On the other hand
, those people who care about their problems and attempt to solve them,
will be Remove the comma
apply
success
. The more effort, the more improvement. Replace the word
successful
Therefore
, if we are not satisfied with our situation we have to change our routine. it is not possible to continue our previous lifestyle and we witness of proper situation overnight. but there are some exceptions, such
as a family that we can not fix it
, and we ought to get Correct pronoun usage
apply
along with
that and just accept that.
In conclusion, both of them play a critical role in our lives,So I myself use them in every stages
of my life, but it is obvious, Change to a singular noun
stage
with
a lot of effort we can achieve whatever we want, and climb up the career ladder. Correct word choice
that with
furthermore
, nothing could be obtained immediately.Submitted by hastytajassosy on
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coherence cohesion
Ensure that the essay follows a clear, logical structure by using well-defined paragraphs and clear topic sentences to guide the reader through the arguments.
coherence cohesion
Improve the introduction and conclusion by providing a more engaging opening statement and a summarizing conclusion that effectively encapsulates the essay's main points.
coherence cohesion
Develop main points with better-supported arguments and more elaboration. Use specific examples to substantiate your opinions and views on the matter.
task achievement
Address all parts of the prompt fully to ensure a complete response. Make sure that both views and your own opinion are discussed equitably and with a clear personal stance.
task achievement
Communicate your ideas clearly and in a more comprehensive manner. Work on the readability of sentences by checking grammar and enhancing lexical resource.
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Incorporate relevant and specific examples to supplement the arguments, which helps in demonstrating a thorough understanding of the topic and providing concrete support for your points.
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