The line graph shows the information average number of visitors entering a museum in summer and winter in 2003. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below.

The line graph shows the information average number of visitors entering a museum in summer and winter in 2003. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below.
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line graph enumerates, the median amount of tourists who came to see the British Museum in mid and end of the year 2003.
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, more people are prone to visit the Museum during summer rather than winter, especially in the daytime between 1000 to 1500. First of all, there is a drastically increasing trend from morning to afternoon during the summer and it gradually decreases after 1200 in the day.
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, nearly 1500 of the population has visited
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the data given here and demonstrate the maximum.
On the other hand
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, the lowest proportion of guests can be seen in the winter season.
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, until 1000 in the dawn, a mild increasing trend of visitors can be seen and it is nearly 500 people in the count. After that, irregular rise and fall are noted.
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, after 12 o'clock in the day, a significant decrease in visitors can be seen.
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, in colder periods of the year, no visits to the museum are recorded after 3 pm in the day.
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Vocabulary: The word "trend" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "decreases" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "nearly" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • Peak season
  • Off-peak season
  • Visitor influx
  • Steady increase
  • Significant drop
  • Month-on-month comparison
  • Seasonal variation
  • Cultural attraction
  • Tourism trends
  • Historical data
  • Visitor demographics
  • Analytical observation
  • Comparative analysis
  • Statistical evidence
  • Conclusive summary
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