You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The line graph shows the information average number of visitors entering a museum in summer and winter in 2003. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below. You should write at least 150 words.

You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.

The line graph shows the information average number of visitors entering a museum in summer and winter in 2003.

Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below.

You should write at least 150 words.
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This
line graph enumerates, the median amount of tourists who came to see the British Museum in mid and end of the year 2003.
Overall
, more people are prone to visit the Museum during summer rather than winter, especially in the daytime between 1000 to 1500. First of all, there is a drastically increasing trend from morning to afternoon during the summer and it gradually decreases after 1200 in the day.
Moreover
, nearly 1500 of the population has visited
according to
the data given here and demonstrate the maximum.
On the other hand
, the lowest proportion of guests can be seen in the winter season.
Furthermore
, until 1000 in the dawn, a mild increasing trend of visitors can be seen and it is nearly 500 people in the count. After that, irregular rise and fall are noted.
However
, after 12 o'clock in the day, a significant decrease in visitors can be seen.
Additionally
, in colder periods of the year, no visits to the museum are recorded after 3 pm in the day.
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Vocabulary: The word "trend" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "decreases" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "nearly" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • Peak season
  • Off-peak season
  • Visitor influx
  • Steady increase
  • Significant drop
  • Month-on-month comparison
  • Seasonal variation
  • Cultural attraction
  • Tourism trends
  • Historical data
  • Visitor demographics
  • Analytical observation
  • Comparative analysis
  • Statistical evidence
  • Conclusive summary
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