The pie chart below shows the frequency of U.S Adults’ online purchasing habits in 2015, while the bar chart shows a further classification denoting online purchasing preference. Summarise the data by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The given pie chart and bar chart illustrate the proportion of US
adults
about the frequency of shops online and a comparison of shopping preferences of US adults
. The both
units were measured in per cent and preferences Remove the article
Both
divided
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were divided
in
buy online and buy in physical Change preposition
into
store
.
Overall
, it can be clearly seen that the majority of US adults
are less often to purchased
online and most Wrong verb form
purchase
of
US Change preposition
apply
adults
prefer to buy in physical stores in all shoppers category
.
In terms of the percentage of US Fix the agreement mistake
shopper categories
adults
who shopping
online, 37% of it Change the form of the verb
shop
were
less often to shop online. The second place Correct subject-verb agreement
was
with
28% of US Add a missing verb
is with
adults
who shopping
a few times a month. A fifth of it were never Wrong verb form
shop
shop
online and the rest Wrong verb form
shopped
of
15% Change preposition
apply
were
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apply
shop
online every week.
Regarding the bar graph, 60% Wrong verb form
shopped
US
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of US
Adults of
weekly online Correct your spelling
Adult
shoppers
were
prefer to buy online, meanwhile the buy in physical Unnecessary verb
apply
store
only just below 40%. Meanwhile, the other categories have Fix the agreement mistake
stores
a
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a contrast proportion
contrast proportions
contrast
proportions. More than just 60% of all online Replace the word
contrasting
shoppers
were shopping in physical store
and only above 30% buy online. The smallest gap was in Fix the agreement mistake
stores
montly
online Correct your spelling
monthly
shoppers
, with just below 60% buy
in physical Wrong verb form
buying
store
and approximately 20% lower for buy online. Fix the agreement mistake
stores
Lastly
, the biggest different
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difference
was
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apply
occured
in less frequent online Correct your spelling
occurred
shoppers
, with 80% prefer
to buy in physical Wrong verb form
preferring
store
and just below 20% Fix the agreement mistake
stores
buy in
online.Replace the word
buying
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Conclusion: The conclusion is too long.
Vocabulary: Replace the words adults, store, shoppers with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "chart" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "proportion" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "just below" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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