The table below shows social and economic indicators for four countries in 1994, according to United Nations statistics. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
This
table demonstrates the economic and social indicators for four countries Canada
, Japan
, Peru, Zaire
. Correct word choice
and Zaire
According to
United Nations statistics. The Annual income per person in Japan
is 1570 US dollars and
Correct word choice
apply
that
is the highest income compared to Correct pronoun usage
which
with
the other countries, Change preposition
apply
on the other
hand
the lowest country income is Add the comma(s)
hand,
Zaire
with each citizen taking 130 USD, which is a significant difference. Canadaians earn 11100 dollars which is less than less than the average Japanese taking 15760 US dollars, Peru’s earnings is
higher than Change the verb form
are
Zaire
’s by $30 at
recording $160.
The life expectancy in Change preposition
apply
Canada
is the second highest of the group at 76 just slightly lower than Japan
, wages, Zaire
Change preposition
in Zaire
is
the lowest and Peru is higher than Correct subject-verb agreement
are
Zaire
.
Canada
recorded the highest number in the daily calorie supply per person at 3326. Just below Canada
is Japan
at 2846, Zaire
is by far the lowest country for calorie intake at 1749 a day,
Canada
and Japan
recorded the same percentage of adult literacy rate at 99 per cent. These
figure falls to 68 Change the determiner
This
percent
in Peru and, 34 per cent in Change the spelling
per cent
Zaire
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