The table below shows social and economic indicators for four countries in 1994, according to United Nations statistics. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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table demonstrates the economic and social indicators for four countries

Canada

Japan

, Peru,

Zaire

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and Zaire

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According to

United Nations statistics. The Annual income per person in

Japan

is 1570 US dollars

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apply

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that

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which

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is the highest income compared to

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the other countries,

on the other

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the lowest country income is

Zaire

with each citizen taking 130 USD, which is a significant difference. Canadaians earn 11100 dollars which is less than less than the average Japanese taking 15760 US dollars, Peru’s earnings

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higher than

Zaire

’s by $30

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recording $160. The life expectancy in

Canada

is the second highest of the group at 76 just slightly lower than

Japan

, wages,

Zaire

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in Zaire

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are

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the lowest and Peru is higher than

Zaire

Canada

recorded the highest number in the daily calorie supply per person at 3326. Just below

Canada

Japan

at 2846,

Zaire

is by far the lowest country for calorie intake at 1749 a day,

Canada

and

Japan

recorded the same percentage of adult literacy rate at 99 per cent.

These

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figure falls to 68

percent

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per cent

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in Peru and, 34 per cent in

Zaire

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The table below shows social and economic indicators for four countries in 1994, according to United Nations statistics. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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