The table below shows social and economic indicators for four countries in 1994, according to United Nations statistics. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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table demonstrates the economic and social indicators for four countries

Canada

Japan

, Peru,

Zaire

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According to

United Nations statistics. The Annual income per person in

Japan

is 1570 US dollars

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that

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is the highest income compared to

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the other countries,

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the lowest country income is

Zaire

with each citizen taking 130 USD, which is a significant difference. Canadaians earn 11100 dollars which is less than less than the average Japanese taking 15760 US dollars, Peru’s earnings

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higher than

Zaire

’s by $30

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recording $160. The life expectancy in

Canada

is the second highest of the group at 76 just slightly lower than

Japan

, wages,

Zaire

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in Zaire

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the lowest and Peru is higher than

Zaire

Canada

recorded the highest number in the daily calorie supply per person at 3326. Just below

Canada

Japan

at 2846,

Zaire

is by far the lowest country for calorie intake at 1749 a day,

Canada

and

Japan

recorded the same percentage of adult literacy rate at 99 per cent.

These

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figure falls to 68

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in Peru and, 34 per cent in

Zaire

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The table below shows social and economic indicators for four countries in 1994, according to United Nations statistics. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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Many university students live with their families, while others live away from home because their universities are in different places. What are the advantages and disadvantages both situations.

Some university students want to learn about other subjects in addition to their main subjects. Others believe it is more important to give all their time and attention to studying for a qualification. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

You travelled by a long distance bus recently and your suitcase was damaged. Write a letter to the bus company. In your letter •Inform the bus company of when and to where you travelled •Describe your suitcase and what happened to it •Explain why the company should pay for a new suitcase