The tables below give information about sales of Fairtrade-labelled coffee and bananas in 1999 and 2004 in five European countries.

The tables below give information about sales of Fairtrade-labelled coffee and bananas in 1999 and 2004 in five European countries.
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The tables compare the amount of money invested in purchasing coffee and bananas in different European nations, namely the UK,
Switzerland
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,
Denmark
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, Belgium and
Sweden
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in 1999 and 2004.
Overall
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, these products had the most popularity in
Switzerland
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in all periods except for in 2004.
Moreover
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, all the investigations had an upward trend, despite buying bananas in
Sweden
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and
Denmark
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.
According to
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the first table,
Switzerland
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stood in first place in 1999, recording 3
million
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euros, following which witnessed a double rise and ranked as the second country in 2004.
By contrast
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, the amount of coffee the UK sold was 1.5
million
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in 1999,
while
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that increased significantly to reach 20
million
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and overtaken
Switzerland
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in 2004. In 1999,
Denmark
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, Belgium, and
Sweden
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accounted for 1.8, 1, and 0.8
million
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and saw a rise of 0.2, 0.7, and 0.2
million
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, respectively. Regarding the figures for sailing bananas,
Switzerland
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stood as the first nation interested in
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fruit at 15
million
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in 1999, dramatically
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and reaching 47
million
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5 years later. After that, the UK and Belgium
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had the lowest share in 1999, recorded second and third place at 5.5 and 4
million
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in 2004, in order.
Denmark
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and
Sweden
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saw a decline and stood
at the end
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of the list in 2004.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words switzerland, denmark, sweden, million with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "tables" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "rise" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "stood" was used 3 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • Fairtrade sales
  • significant growth
  • trends and patterns
  • market expansion
  • sustainable consumption
  • ethical products
  • consumer awareness
  • economic impact
  • percentage increase
  • market share
  • profit margins
  • trade initiatives
  • consumer behavior
  • retail figures
  • economic indicators
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