The graph below shows the amount of money spent on books in Germany, France, Italy and Austria between 1995 and 2005.
The line graph illustrates the amount of cash spent on books from 1995 to 2005 in four different countries, which are
Germany
, France
, Italy and Austria
Overall
, Germany
and Italy show a fluctuating graph while
France
and Austria
are continuously increasing their book spending. Over four countries, Germany
has conquered the title of highest book spender whereas
Austria
is the opposite. However
, the situation changed in 2003 as Italy is now in the lowest position.
Germany
spent over 80 to 90 million
dollars on books between 1995 to 2005. Although
it is fluctuating, Germany
is still the biggest spender. The second is France
which rose consistently since 1995 and now spent approximately 70 million
dollars in 2005. There is still quite a big gap between Germany
and France
.
The third highest spender used to be Italy, as the country spent 50 million
expanse of cash in 1995. Nonetheless
, over a period of time, Austria
has now taken Italy's position. In 2003, Austria
surpassed Italy by spending 60 million
on books. From there, Austria
's spending escalated quickly until the gap between Austria
and Italy was roughly 10 million
dollars in 2005.Submitted by ieltswriting91 on
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