The graph below shows the amount of money spent on books in Germany, France, Italy and Austria between 1995 and 2005.

The graph below shows the amount of money spent on books in Germany, France, Italy and Austria between 1995 and 2005.
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The line graph illustrates the amount of cash spent on books from 1995 to 2005 in four different countries, which are
Germany
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,
France
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, Italy and
Austria
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Overall
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,
Germany
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and Italy show a fluctuating graph
while
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France
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and
Austria
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are continuously increasing their book spending. Over four countries,
Germany
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has conquered the title of highest book spender
whereas
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Austria
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is the opposite.
However
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, the situation changed in 2003 as Italy is now in the lowest position.
Germany
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spent over 80 to 90
million
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dollars on books between 1995 to 2005.
Although
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it is fluctuating,
Germany
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is still the biggest spender. The second is
France
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which rose consistently since 1995 and now spent approximately 70
million
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dollars in 2005. There is still quite a big gap between
Germany
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and
France
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. The third highest spender used to be Italy, as the country spent 50
million
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expanse of cash in 1995.
Nonetheless
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, over a period of time,
Austria
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has now taken Italy's position. In 2003,
Austria
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surpassed Italy by spending 60
million
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on books. From there,
Austria
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's spending escalated quickly until the gap between
Austria
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and Italy was roughly 10
million
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dollars in 2005.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words germany, france, austria, million with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "amount" in your introduction.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • expenditure
  • fluctuate
  • trend
  • peak
  • trough
  • correlation
  • digital reading platforms
  • socio-economic factors
  • initiatives
  • cultural influence
  • statistical data
  • purchasing habits
  • book industry
  • consumer spending
  • educational resources
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