The graph below shows the amount of money spent on books in Germany, France, Italy and Austria between 1995 and 2005.
The line graph illustrates the amount of cash spent on books from 1995 to 2005 in four different countries, which are
Germany
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France
, Italy and Use synonyms
Austria
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Overall
, Linking Words
Germany
and Italy show a fluctuating graph Use synonyms
while
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Austria
are continuously increasing their book spending. Over four countries, Use synonyms
Germany
has conquered the title of highest book spender Use synonyms
whereas
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Austria
is the opposite. Use synonyms
However
, the situation changed in 2003 as Italy is now in the lowest position.
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Germany
spent over 80 to 90 Use synonyms
million
dollars on books between 1995 to 2005. Use synonyms
Although
it is fluctuating, Linking Words
Germany
is still the biggest spender. The second is Use synonyms
France
which rose consistently since 1995 and now spent approximately 70 Use synonyms
million
dollars in 2005. There is still quite a big gap between Use synonyms
Germany
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France
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The third highest spender used to be Italy, as the country spent 50 Use synonyms
million
expanse of cash in 1995. Use synonyms
Nonetheless
, over a period of time, Linking Words
Austria
has now taken Italy's position. In 2003, Use synonyms
Austria
surpassed Italy by spending 60 Use synonyms
million
on books. From there, Use synonyms
Austria
's spending escalated quickly until the gap between Use synonyms
Austria
and Italy was roughly 10 Use synonyms
million
dollars in 2005.Use synonyms
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