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The line graph below shows US consumers' average annual expenditures on cell phone and residential phone services between 2001 and 2010.

The line graph below shows US consumers' average annual expenditures on cell phone and residential phone services between 2001 and 2010.
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The line chart provides
infornation
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information
 about the
consumers
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consumer
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 ratio for expenditures of cell
phone
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phones
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 and services of residential
phon
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phones
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 in
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the united
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united
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United
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stuate
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states
state
during
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over
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 10 years.
Overall
, the main consuming
expenditures
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expenditure
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 during
period
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the period
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 was cell
phone
service
 which
its
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apply
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began
by
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at
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 the lowest. In
cntrast
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contrast
, residential
phone
 services
were
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apply
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began
by
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at
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 the highest point
thus
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and thus
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, decreased to about half. As you
seen
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have seen
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, the highest consuming
service
 was the residential
phone
by
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apply
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700
dollar
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dollars
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at
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in
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first
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the first
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 year.
Then
 gradually decreased by about 50
dollars
 until
reach
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reached
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 nearly 500
dollars
 in 2006 which
it
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apply
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was cross the value with cell
phone
service
 but it
was
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susbstantial
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substantial
substantially
 rose to
reached
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reach
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 600
dollar
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dollars
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 in 2007.
Additianly
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Additionally
 before its sharp increase it
was
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slightly decreased between 2007 to 2008 was about 650
dollars
 after that
its
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 sharp
increased
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increase
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 to its
treand
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trend
tread
 was 800
dollars
 in the final spam.
Comparing
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Compared
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for
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to
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, residential
phone
service
 consumed half of
its
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it
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.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words phone, service, dollars with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "decreased" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increase" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "reach" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 4 times.
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