The table below shows local catches and imports of fresh fish into Perth, Australia for the years 2004 - 2014. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The table provides information about fresh
fish
supplies in Perth, Australia during the years of
2004-2014.
Generally, Perth's fresh Change preposition
apply
fish
were supplied from two sources, the local catches and imports and for a 10-year period
the local fish
dominated the market.
Firstly
, Perth's fresh fish
resources gradually increased during the 2004-2010 period
, started
with 3142 metric tons (Wrong verb form
starting
MT
) in 2004 and finished
at 8035 Wrong verb form
finishing
MT
in 2010. However
, the trend then
decreased in 2012 and remained stable for 2013-2014 around 5800 MT
. Around 70 to 80% of fish
were caught by local fishermen compared to around 20% of fish
were imported.
Secondly
, the local catches showed a positive trend for 2004
-2009 Correct article usage
the 2004
period
. The fish
supplies started with just 2677 MT
in 2004 and reached the highest production with 7844 MT
in 2009. After that, the local catches decreased to just 6831 MT
in 2010 and continued stable
around 4000-5000 Correct word choice
to stabilise at
MT
for the last
3 years. The imported fish
production Verb problem
apply
was
increased significantly during 2004-2010 but for the 2011-2013 Unnecessary verb
apply
period
the production was stable Change preposition
at
in
1000-1200 Change preposition
at
MT
and finished with just 782 MT
in 2014.Submitted by nadhif2799 on
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